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Ayame
Mar 19, 2011 14:48:40 GMT -5
Post by Ayame23 on Mar 19, 2011 14:48:40 GMT -5
- The Basics -
Name: Ayame Meaning: Japanese Means "iris" in Japanese. Nicknames: Aya Alias: None yet
Species: Dog Breed: Border Collie
Age: 1 Gender: Female
- Appearance -
Height: 70cm Weight: 13Kg
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Description: Ayame was born in Ohu. Her mother took care of her when she was a pup, unitl the day came when Akabuto killed her mother, and she was left to fend for herself. She survived on birds, and grew up a stray dog. As she grew older, her abitlities started to increse, and by the age of 1, she was smart, fast and you could even say good in battle. She even developed her teeth to be sharper than most dogs, but only a small bit. Though she is a good fighter, she has never killed another dog in her life.
She got her scars when she was protecting her food from another dog. -----------------------
Accessories: None yet. Scars: Three claw marks at the side of her face, and two claw marks on her left back leg.
Other Information: None.
- Personality -
Physical Aspects:
- Is your character physically stronger than the average member of his/her species? Somewhat
- Is your character faster and/or more agile than the average member of his/her species? Yes
- Is your character more attractive (handsome/beautiful) than the average member of his/her species? Somewhat
- Has your character had any specific training or other type of experience with fighting, and is therefore quite knowledgeable in the subject? Yes
- Does your character have any weapons (including particularly sharp teeth or claws) they can wield in battle? Yes
- Is your character notoriously brave, determined and/or particularly aggressive when it comes to confrontations of any sort? No
- Is your character immune to or capable of ignoring pain or other sorts of physical ailments when in the heat of battle? No
Mental Aspects:
- Is your character more knowledgeable/intelligent than most creatures of the same species and age? Yes
- Does your character learn new things and tasks quickly and more easily than most creatures of the same species and age? Yes
- Is your character successful at remembering new tasks, concepts, commands and/or locations without extensive repetition? Somewhat
- Is your character capable of taking advice and learning from others around him/her? Somewhat
- Does your character pay close or otherwise extensive attention to their environment or surroundings? Yes
- Does your character have any senses that are keener/more accurate to use than the average member of his/her species (this includes magic and fighting techniques such as nature sensitivity and Bat's mind's eye)? Yes
Social Aspects:
- Does your character typically get along with others? Somewhat
- Is your character friendly or otherwise very welcoming of other creatures/strangers? Yes
- Is your character caring, compassionate or otherwise concerned for the well-being of others? Yes
- Is your character generally accepted by the majority of his/her species/society (as opposed to being ostracized because of the way they look or something they've done)? Yes
- Does your character handle stressful or otherwise testing situations in a calm, or otherwise pleasant manner (as opposed to either growing ridiculously nervous, anxious or angry)? Yes
- Is your character happy with their life so far and the choices they've made up to this point(as opposed to being traumatized, bitter or emotionally unstable as a result of past happenings)? No
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General Description: Even though no-one had ever looked after her, she became much smarter than other pups her age. She would always be careful in case she sensed something, and was always listening for danger.
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Strengths: She is quick, agaile, and when in battle, she uses rocks, trees, etc. to improve her fighting from bouning back and forth. She lanches quick claw attack, and her main sttack system is to wear the enemy out. She has sharp theeth she uses for biting.
Weaknesses: Though she is agile, she is quite weak. She woudn't survive a large attack from an enemy, and she finds it quite hard to realease herself when she is pined. If she is struck in battle, it will often take her about half a minute to recover, depending on the size of the attack. Since dodging is her main safety system, if she fails to dodge, she becomes vunarable to the enemy.
- Other Information -
Pack: None Yet Rank: None Yet
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Fighting Techniques:
'Furasshu'
A quick jump over the enemy while aimming your claws at the enemy's face/back/etc.
- Images -
Thank you! I don't mind changing a few things if you need me too.
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Ayame
Mar 19, 2011 17:46:02 GMT -5
Post by Feral on Mar 19, 2011 17:46:02 GMT -5
The name Ayame is already taken, so you'll have to chose another name for your character.
The text in the first description under appearance needs to be replaced to the general description section. This will also help you meet the required 5 minimum sentences for general description. Your first paragraph needs to be at least 4 sentences of what the character looks like.
You have too many 'yes' answers, they need to be equal to the no answers in the questions. Out of the three sections you need to make sure that one is at the high end of skill, one is low end, and one just average.
We are also set far into the future of the manga/animes so characters like Akabuto no longer exist.
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