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Post by Feral on Sept 25, 2010 19:11:43 GMT -5
- The Basics -
Name: Purgatory Meaning: Between heaven and hell, or life and death. Nicknames: Tor, Torry, 'mum' Alias: N/A
Species: Wild Dog Hybrid Breed: Dhole/Dog Mix (Catahoula Leopard Dog)
Age: Young Adult, 2 years. Gender: Female
- Appearance -
Height: 20 inches Weight: 50 lbs
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Description: A medium sized, fluffy dog with a neon pink coat. Soot gray markings create 'stockings' on the front feet, inside her ears, and most of her muzzle. Curving marks run across her whole back, from neck to the base of her tail. Her leopard dog genes can be seen in the spot and ring markings at her shoulders, hips, and tail. She has silver claws, long from lack of use, and gray paw pads and nose. The inside of her mouth is purplish black. Her eyes are light blue. Purgatory is a skinny, flighty thing, always seen carrying her young puppy between her jaws.
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Accessories: None. Scars: None.
Other Information: She has four puppies, three of which are missing. because of this she never lets the remaining one out of her sight.
- Personality -
Physical Aspects: Average
- Is your character physically stronger than the average member of his/her species? No
- Is your character faster and/or more agile than the average member of his/her species? Yes
- Is your character more attractive (handsome/beautiful) than the average member of his/her species? Yes
- Has your character had any specific training or other type of experience with fighting, and is therefore quite knowledgeable in the subject? No
- Does your character have any weapons (including particularly sharp teeth or claws) they can wield in battle? Yes
- Is your character notoriously brave, determined and/or particularly aggressive when it comes to confrontations of any sort? Somewhat
- Is your character immune to or capable of ignoring pain or other sorts of physical ailments when in the heat of battle? No
Mental Aspects: Strong
- Is your character more knowledgeable/intelligent than most creatures of the same species and age? Somewhat
- Does your character learn new things and tasks quickly and more easily than most creatures of the same species and age? Somewhat
- Is your character successful at remembering new tasks, concepts, commands and/or locations without extensive repetition? Yes
- Is your character capable of taking advice and learning from others around him/her? Yes
- Does your character pay close or otherwise extensive attention to their environment or surroundings? Yes
- Does your character have any senses that are keener/more accurate to use than the average member of his/her species (this includes magic and fighting techniques such as nature sensitivity and Bat's mind's eye)? Somewhat
Social Aspects: Weak
- Does your character typically get along with others? Somewhat
- Is your character friendly or otherwise very welcoming of other creatures/strangers? No
- Is your character caring, compassionate or otherwise concerned for the well-being of others? Somewhat
- Is your character generally accepted by the majority of his/her species/society (as opposed to being ostracized because of the way they look or something they've done)? Somewhat
- Does your character handle stressful or otherwise testing situations in a calm, or otherwise pleasant manner (as opposed to either growing ridiculously nervous, anxious or angry)? No
- Is your character happy with their life so far and the choices they've made up to this point(as opposed to being traumatized, bitter or emotionally unstable as a result of past happenings)? No
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General Description: She is always protective of her pup, after losing his three siblings, Purgatory never lets him out of her sight. Her life revolves around keeping him safe, and she even goes so far as to stop eating so he can have the food she catches. Escaping a kennel in the farmlands, she's made her way to the woods. All the sounds and smells of the wild animals and the strange terrain here make her very nervous. Being a hybrid, she is faster and more agile than ordinary dogs. She's also a good swimmer. However she will usually run away to make sure her puppy doesn't get hurt, instead of fighting. She's already been attacked by wild dogs once, and it has left her with pain and a limp in her hind leg.
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Strengths: * Sharp fangs. * Fast. * Smart. * Agile. * Protective. * Good swimmer.
Weaknesses: * Alone. * Has a puppy to take care of. * Doesn't eat much, since she gives all her food to her pup. * Injured hind leg. * Nervous. * Limps.
- Other Information -
History: She doesn't talk about it, and don't ask. Not that she'd tell anyone, but having pups hadn't been her decision. But she is recently escaped from a kennel. Right now she is looking for her lost puppies.
Theme Songs: Atwa by System of a Down, Hold Her Down by Toad The Wet Sprocket, Aikoi by Yuki Kajiura.
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Pack: Nope Rank: None
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Relations: Her puppies, three are missing - Cailean, Brennan, and Einarr. And Pavlov is with her always.
Magic: Bite 'N Strike - Clamps onto the enemy and spins their body to tear at the flesh with their fangs. Fighting Techniques: Quickly dart in and out, taking little snaps of flesh at a time to wear the enemy down.
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Post by Feral on Oct 1, 2010 18:56:04 GMT -5
Complete. All fees accepted. ($175 (I'm classifying her as a coyote hybrid, since that's the closest)) need another mod to check and approve.
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Post by Sawyer on Oct 5, 2010 13:13:42 GMT -5
Overall it looks good, however it seems like there should be a couple more nos. I'm assuming that social is the weakest? It seems too... averaged, when physical is clearly average. Throw a no or two in there and it'll be all set.
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Post by Feral on Oct 5, 2010 17:08:27 GMT -5
Yeah I actually made some changes to the character without fixing the Personality bullets. My bad. xD Fixed.
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Post by Sawyer on Oct 5, 2010 21:48:19 GMT -5
Alright, good to go ^^
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