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Zizi
Apr 11, 2008 22:57:57 GMT -5
Post by tai on Apr 11, 2008 22:57:57 GMT -5
- The Basics -
Name: Zizi Meaning: -- Nicknames: Twerp, Kid, Zi Alias: Demon Destroyer (pup fantasies)
Species: Dog Breed: Shikoku Dog
Age: 9 months Gender: Male
- Appearance -
Height: 16 inches
Weight: 21 lbs
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Description: For a young dog, he certainly does have the colors of a full grown Shikoku. Zizi has a dark blue-grey pelt, thick and medium in length. His stomach, chest, maw, and parts of his legs are all an off white, slightly dusty brown color. The top of his head and only partway down his back, getting dark the way down, is a stripe of dark grey. Zizi has light silver blue eyes. His ears are always alert, and his eyes always full of mischief. This male always seems to have a smile on his maw, no matter what the circumstance.
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Accessories: Right ear pierced with a small cuff Scars: --
Other Information: Programed to cause trouble
- Personality -
Summary: There is definately not a dog like Zizi. Always full of energy, he cannot sit still for more than five seconds. Talking comes naturally, and this male does not understnd the meaning of shut up. The only time he is quiet is when he's sleeping or eating. Even then he finds ways to talk occassionally. Nothing is off limits for Zizi and the work No only means it's better than he originally thought. He needs something to do at every moment of the day, even if it is only chasing his tail.
Zizi finds a way to annoy everyone, most of the time just by opening his maw. Fighting is nothing but a joke for him. Zizi is always spitting out insults to upset his opponent, leaping out of the way of attacks and only talking more. Enrage the opponent and make them screw up. He knows he usually can't win in a fight, but will act overconfident the entire time. You can tell he's nervous by how he acts (usually prancing about with ever muscle tense) or by the way he talks (a slight nervous tint to his words).
Even though he has enough energy to light up Tokyo for a week, Zizi is the laziest creature alive. Constant complaining and whining make up the vocal activities for the day to Tai and he's always the first to suggest a rest at every single possible moment. Even so, he'd be willing to do almost anything for the creatures he conciders friends. He still holds that pup innocence and trusts everyone.
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Physical: There's not much strength for this soon-to-be-one pup. Zizi is good at being annoying, usually pissing off the wrong people. However, he is good at making friends. When he puts his mind to it, no one can stop him. He's weak on strength, but quick when the time calls for it, obvious in the insult and run way he fights. Zizi is danger prone, and well, does trip over his own paws. Most of the time it's branches.
Mental: Oh, how so many people think he lacks up here. Zizi is smarter than he puts on, which isn't much. He's still too much like a puppy. Not very observant at all, he's the one always getting ambushed or attacked. The Shikoku male has a very active mind and does say some pretty weird things. He knows what the say and when it say it, though it isn't always good things. Zizi has a short attention span and any moving thing catches his attention. The male doesn't listen well to anyone unless it's something he wants to hear. As well, Zizi daydreams more than he pays attention.
Social: Zizi trusts nearly everyone he comes across. Friendly, and damn well knows how to show it, very few can get out of his sight without saying Hi. Often times, he annoys others away from him and is easily dubbed an idiot by those who don't know him well. He cares for his friends and would put his life on the line to protect them.
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Strengths: He's a friendly one and can get most dogs to become his friend, or give out some needed information. He doesn't show his smarts, so others tend to underestimate him, which leaves an opening for surprise. Stealth is something he's gotten quite good at, at least when in a city. Zizi is quick when the time calls for it. His undying love to move gives him a lot to go off of.
Weaknesses: Not the strongest thing in the world, Zizi could easily be taken down in a fight. He's a lazy dog, only ever wanting to do what he wants to do. Zizi let's his emotions get the better of him constantly. Prone to anything even remotely similar to injuries, he's contantly getting attacked, injured, taken hostage, ect. This dog hates it when others pick on his fiends and tends to pick fights with the wrong dogs in the process.
- Other Information -
History: Born on the streets with not a care in the world. He was the only one of the three pup litter to survive the harsh conditions of the city. His mother was sick and provided enough for him until she had to pass him off to a female friend of hers who recently lost her entire litter. From the beginning, Zizi had been nothing but a pain. He would sit for hours and talk with the birds and cats. Or even go out and try to talk to the humans! Once he was old enough, his foster mother was gone.
Living on the streets was hard after that. Zizi relied on the birds to help him, though they didn't like the idea at all and openly showed him that. Somehow, he managed to survive long enough to meet Tai. The mutt gave him some food before walking off. Zizi tagged along, always bringing trouble for the other dog. And no matter what, they could always find a way to continue on the path they had started on.
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Pack: -- Rank: Loner
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Relations: Friends with Tai
Magic: -- Fighting Techniques: Insult and run
- Images -
Template by Sharp -WITHOUT CUFF
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Sandi
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Zizi
Apr 12, 2008 7:53:03 GMT -5
Post by Sandi on Apr 12, 2008 7:53:03 GMT -5
You've said he's energetic, but lazy. They are two totally opposite words. It wouldn't really make much sense. And I also think you need one more weakness.
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tai
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Zizi
Apr 12, 2008 16:50:23 GMT -5
Post by tai on Apr 12, 2008 16:50:23 GMT -5
I think I worded that part wrong. He's energetic in a way where he needs to run around or be doing something almost all the time, but when it comes to work, he only does what he wants to do.
And I added another weakness.
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Zizi
Apr 13, 2008 10:08:19 GMT -5
Post by Sharp on Apr 13, 2008 10:08:19 GMT -5
I just think he's a little too strong mentally. Or, rather, doesn't have enough mental weaknesses. I'm getting the impression that physical is his weakest area, while social is his strongest. So Mental should be average, but all throughout the bio, you state that he is smarter than he lets on but you never actually say how smart. He's not very observant, which is a pretty substantial flaw in that area, but that's the only one really see. He still knows what to say and when to say it, is obviously skilled when it comes to trickery and fooling others, and his mind is "active" as you put it
In short, he's a little unbalanced. So, just tone down his mental prowess a little bit and you'll be set personality wise.
However, there is one other much less important problem. He's 25 inches tall and only 9 months old? Shikokus only get to be about 21 inches tall as adults, and your puppy here is already 4 inches taller than that. He's the size of my 8 year old german shepherd mix. X3 So, lessen the height there and you'll be all set. ;3
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Sandi
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Zizi
Apr 13, 2008 10:23:32 GMT -5
Post by Sandi on Apr 13, 2008 10:23:32 GMT -5
ahah, didn't catch those. >.< *slaps self*
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Zizi
Apr 13, 2008 10:36:24 GMT -5
Post by Sharp on Apr 13, 2008 10:36:24 GMT -5
Oh hush you. X3 You are doing very well, accepting characters. You should be patting yourself on the back, not slapping yourself in the face.
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tai
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Zizi
Apr 13, 2008 10:36:39 GMT -5
Post by tai on Apr 13, 2008 10:36:39 GMT -5
Ah. I think I misread the info on Shikoku's then. ^^; Alright. Toned down his height and added some things to his mental.
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Zizi
Apr 13, 2008 10:39:34 GMT -5
Post by Sharp on Apr 13, 2008 10:39:34 GMT -5
Accepted :3
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tai
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Zizi
Apr 13, 2008 10:44:29 GMT -5
Post by tai on Apr 13, 2008 10:44:29 GMT -5
Oh cool. ^^ Thanks!
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