yuri
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Yuri
Oct 9, 2008 17:13:50 GMT -5
Post by yuri on Oct 9, 2008 17:13:50 GMT -5
- The Basics -
Name: Yuri Meaning: Lilly Nicknames: Flower Alias: None
Species: Dog Breed: German Shepherd
Age: 4 years Gender: Female
- Appearance -
Height: 23 in. Weight: 78 lbs.
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Description: Yuri is black and white, but her whole lower body is white. Her pads are black with a grayish tent to it. Her inner ears are white like her lower body, and also her face. Yuri's eyes are as blue as the sky, which probably attracts most of the males.
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Accessories: None Scars: None
Other Information: Not really
- Personality -
Physical Aspects:
- Is your character physically stronger than the average member of his/her species?No
- Is your character faster and/or more agile than the average member of his/her species? Yes
- Is your character more attractive (handsome/beautiful) than the average member of his/her species? Somewhat
- Has your character had any specific training or other type of experience with fighting, and is therefore quite knowledgeable in the subject? Somewhat
- Does your character have any weapons (including particularly sharp teeth or claws) they can wield in battle? No
- Is your character immune to or capable of ignoring pain or other sorts of physical ailments when in the heat of battle? No
Mental Aspects:
- Is your character more knowledgeable/intelligent than most creatures of the same species and age? No
- Does your character learn new things and tasks quickly and more easily than most creatures of the same species and age? Somewhat
- Is your character successful at remembering new tasks, concepts, commands and/or locations without extensive repetition? Yes
- Is your character capable of taking advice and learning from others around him/her? Yes
- Does your character pay close or otherwise extensive attention to their environment or surroundings? Yes
- Does your character have any senses that are keener/more accurate to use than the average member of his/her species (this includes magic and fighting techniques such as nature sensitivity and Bat's mind's eye)? No
Social Aspects:
- Does your character typically get along with others? Yes
- Is your character friendly or otherwise very welcoming of other creatures/strangers? Somewhat
- Is your character caring, compassionate or otherwise concerned for the well-being of others? Yes
- Is your character generally accepted by the majority of his/her species/society (as opposed to being ostracized because of the way they look or something they've done)? Yes
- Does your character handle stressful or otherwise testing situations in a calm, or otherwise pleasant manner (as opposed to either growing ridiculously nervous, anxious or angry)? Somewhat
- Is your character happy with their life so far and the choices they've made up to this point(as opposed to being traumatized, bitter or emotionally unstable as a result of past happenings)? Somewhat
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General Description: Yuri is sweet and understanding, and is easy to get along with. The males are always surprised at her agility, and just stare in awe. Sometimes their starring can be because of Yuri's beauty. She doesn't really like that, but maybe it's a good thing, so that a male can notice her and then see what's she's like on the inside. Yuri isn't a very strong fighter, but she has speed and stamina.
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Strengths: Friends, Speed, Stamina, Daylight, Sense of smell
Weaknesses: Being alone, Strength (not very strong), Can't swim well, Being alone in battle, Fast rivers
- Other Information -
History: When Yuri was just a pup, her and her parents traveled from place to place a lot. One day however, a band of rogue dogs ran into them. They hated that tresspassers were on their "territory", so they attacked. Yuri and her siblings were told to run by their parents. Their mother and father were killed in the battle, and thrown into the rushing river that was nearby. Yuri and her brother and sister were captured by the band of rogues and were held prisoner. When they got older, Yuri's brother was a slave to the rogues, while Yuri and her sister were treated like gifts from the heavens, for females were valuable to rogues. However, Yuri didn't like it, unlike her sister, who loved being treated like royalty.
One day Yuri's brother was sick of being a slave, and attacked and killed one of the rogues. For his punishment, he was beatened badly and was thrown into the cave that the rogues stayed in. Yuri cried that night for her brother, but her sister was to swept up in the other males that she hardly even noticed. Yuri's brother told her that he would not last much longer with the wounds he had, and wanted her to escape.
The day came when Yuri's brother passed away. Without letting the rogues know, Yuri carried her brother to a nice peaceful spot to bury him. She knew only to well that the rogues would've thrown him in the river like her parents. Her brother's death made up her mind. After she buried him, she ran off in the oppisite direction from the cave. She hated how her sister was, so she left her behind. From this day forward, she still misses her family and grieves for them, and has a fear of rushing rivers. -----------------------
Pack: None yet Rank: None yet
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Relations: None (She's wanting to find a male who likes her for who she is, not by how she looks.)
Magic: No magic Fighting Techniques: None
- Images -
I did my best of re-doing the signature on the pic, since it's transparent.
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Yuri
Oct 11, 2008 18:43:34 GMT -5
Post by wint3rheart on Oct 11, 2008 18:43:34 GMT -5
Looks pretty good, but do you think you could change the Strengths/Weaknesses? I don't think beauty and company are real strengths, because she may not always have strength, and what if she becomes covered in mud?! xD
Strengths and weaknesses should be something like Can/can't swim, how different temp.s effect the character, if they have weak points on their bodies, who or how many they're good/bad against, etc.
Other than that, I'd say this looks pretty good.
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yuri
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Yuri
Oct 11, 2008 19:15:06 GMT -5
Post by yuri on Oct 11, 2008 19:15:06 GMT -5
Now that you mention it, those Strengths sound...weak, XD
lol I'll change it! ^^
EDIT: Changed!
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Yuri
Oct 11, 2008 19:42:07 GMT -5
Post by wint3rheart on Oct 11, 2008 19:42:07 GMT -5
Accepted
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